Sunday, September 25, 2011


You have asked me several times, constable, what occurred on the 3rd of June, and I apologise that it is only now that I am able to relate the events to you. However, the events that led up to the crime in question were much too painful to recollect, and I still shudder when I think of that... thing.

But I know that I have to get this story off my chest, or the nightmares will never stop. However, the story does not start on the 3rd of June. It starts nearly one month before, on the 5th of May...

At the time, I worked as a short story writer, paid by the word. I specialized in the genre of macabre horror, and thus had a peculiar imagination and a slight dose of superstition, which may have been a catalyst to the events that followed. I used my income mainly to support my wife Margaret and I, a quaint happy family of two, soon to be three. You see, Margaret was expecting a baby. I bought pregnancy charms for her (for did I not say that I am somewhat superstitious?) as well as medicine to lessen her pains.

However, I also had a hobby that I used a significant portion of my pay to indulge myself in. This hobby was that of collecting queer and weird objects. Many of the visitors who have seen my collection that are not artists or poets have recoiled in horror at the strange objects that I have bought or imported from different parts of the globe.

These include, among others, a Haitian voodoo doll from the far reaches of Hispanolia, a copy of the Voynich Manuscript, a collection of shrunken heads including Shuar, Achuar and Aguarana tribe creations and the head of a multi-eyed moose from South America.

My wife, as much as she loves me, regularly remarks that the collection that I have may be too macabre for the ordinary taste, and that I should throw the things out, or sell them. And, as much as I love Margaret and regularly give in to her many wishes, I simply could not follow this particular want of hers, as these antiques of mine were far too valuable to simply be disposed of.

On May 5th, I went to a nearby flea market to look for queer items to add to my collection as well as to look for more birth charms for dear Margaret. The flea market sold many things that ordinary people no longer wanted, things which I have come to find regularly consisted of objects strange and eldritch, which were perfect for my collection.

As I looked through the items that came in that day, my eyes fell on a glass sphere. It was about an inch and a half in radius, and I could barely conceal the entire thing in the palm of my hand. Inside the sphere perpetually swirled a mass of a mud-textured substance of many different colours.

Green, blue, purple, brown, all the colors came together and mixed and swirled and separated. I was immediately captivated by the spherical object. I had to have it. I handed twenty bills to the shopkeeper, told him to keep the change, and hurried home with my newfound treasure.

I burst in the door just as Margaret was preparing dinner. I smiled warmly, remarking that whatever she was cooking smelled lovely, as I placed the sphere carefully on the dining table. I then told her not to strain herself, and helped her carry the dishes to the table.

I remember her remarking on the strange artifact, and I saying that I believed that such a captivating artifact would bring us good luck, which we needed, for the child was due to be born the next month. And I remember both of us settling down onto our chairs, eating and enjoying the good company.

But even as I enjoyed Margaret’s company, I could not help but occasionally glance at the patterns forming on the glass sphere. After dinner, I excused myself and brought the sphere to my study to examine it. It induced a nearly hypnotic effect upon my person.

The only effect I can compare with that of looking into the sphere is the mind-numbing and mind-dilapidating relaxing sensation of marijuana. And indeed, I fancied the swirls themselves similar to a hallucination that could only be conjured by one under the ill effect of psychedelic substances. The swirls were almost dream-like, and I could not help myself from looking deep within them into another richer world inhabited by the weird and the unknown.

At first, I only looked at the swirls for minutes at a time. However, as the days progressed, I started looking at them for longer and longer periods of time, feeling myself being pulled into the sphere's spell. I neglected my job and did not write a single story in the entirety of May, and very slowly, I began to neglect Margaret as well.

It got to the point where I would place the sphere upon my study table and look at it, and before I knew it, I would have spent hours looking at the thing, even though it felt like less than a minute! The swirls were consuming my life, and with it, my mind. I say this for I began to get strange revelations from the sphere. The swirls formed images, and, I know it sounds mad, but those images were always of evil things.

Killers. Demons. Sickness. Once I even fancied I saw Lucifer, his horrid and ghastly appearance made manifest through the swirls! I could not take my eyes off the new evils that continuously formed before my eyes!

As I have said, as the days wore on, I grew more and more distant from Margaret. She regularly attempted to bring me out of my seclusion, even going so far as to encourage me to go out to purchase more things to add to my collection, but I remained adamant and stayed in my study all day, only stepping outside to eat.

She grew more and more desperate, telling me that it was unhealthy to look at such a thing for so long a time. And finally, as my interest towards the sphere reached certain heights, her cheerful demeanor dissipated, and she stopped smiling. As I look back now, I regret how I ignored her warnings. It was childish, and if I had only listened to her, I may have prevented what would then follow.

It was on the night of June the 2nd, one day before the actual incident. Staring into my glass sphere as always, I sensed that there was something different about the swirls. I could not place my finger on it, but I was positive that on that night, there was an inherently larger malevolence than there ever had been within that glass sphere.

I watched intently the swirling of the substance as it started molding itself into what I assumed would be the paragon of all evil, when I heard Margaret cry out painfully from outside my chambers. Even though I have grown distant from her, deep within my heart I still loved and cared for her, and on hearing those inhumane shrieks, I feared the worst.

I rushed out through the door to find Margaret groaning in a fetal-like position on the floor. She was breaking water! In my desperation, I took Margaret up in my arms and ran out the front door, not even bothering to lock it. We got into my car, and I sped as fast as I could to the hospital, with her in the backseat crying in pain.

The doctors and nurses carried dear Margaret in a stretcher to the maternity ward, where I accompanied them as they prepared to assist my wife in childbirth. For the first time in a month, the glass sphere was not in my possession. I was not even thinking about it, for my heart and my soul were fraught with worry for Margaret!

I knew she was due, she had been carrying the baby for nine months, and yet, because of my obsession with the glass sphere, I completely disregarded any reason and completely neglected her! Tears in my eyes, I sat by her side, telling her to be strong, and that I was there for her.

Hearing these words, she smiled for the first time in a long while. And finally, with much effort, she gave birth to a lovely baby boy, with a cross shaped birthmark on his right arm. Margaret, though in pain, smiled, and remarked that the cross was surely a good omen. Then, having used up all her energy, she promptly fell asleep. I stayed by her side till morning, cradling the baby boy in my arms.

The next day, we returned home from the hospital in high spirits. We finally had a family! I knew that I had to give attention to my new child, and hurried to my study to put the glass sphere on my collection rack so that it would not disrupt my thoughts any further.

And then I saw what the glass sphere beheld. I uttered a low guttural sound from deep within my bosom. It was the sound of terror, the sound of the betrayed. I fell onto my knees as I beheld the atrocity before me. The contents of the glass sphere, the glass sphere that had only prophesized to me great evil, had not changed from last night. The swirling substance had been held in place, such that it looked as if time had stopped in the sphere. And what had it formed, that horrified me so? I will tell you.

It had formed a baby boy with a cross-shaped birthmark on his right arm.

I ran out like a madman at that instant. My mind was so muddled, the actual events are so hazy… But I remember seizing from the baby from Margaret, and running to my study, locking the door behind me. I remember grabbing the oriental knife that hung from my collection. I remember stabbing the demon, over and over and over.

I remember its smile as I stabbed it. Yes, its smile. A most terrible smile, like the smile of a predator that had lured its prey into a trap… And most singularly of all, I remember the shrieks from outside my door. Pained, coarse, high-pitched shrieks, then a halting, eerie silence. It was only later that I found out that my wife had died from shock.

As you can see, constable, even as I tell the story, I shudder and I weep. Even the mere recollection of it pains my heart so! I have no evidence that what I have said is true. I know that I will be hanged. And I welcome the respite of death, constable; I embrace it, for sweet, sweet death will finally rid me of my grief, my sorrow and most importantly, the nightmares that I have at night… Nightmares of a laughing baby boy with a cross-shaped birthmark on his right arm, molding substance in a glass sphere into forms and shapes of infinite evil!

(This story is credited to a person called Necronophore. It's their first story, so be nice.)


  1. Nice story from the guy. Bit hard to follow in points but it gave me chills so it's been done right!

  2. This had an excellent period feel. The cold, creeping dread was very well-done.

  3. Not bad at all. Well written and well formed. The demon baby thing is a little played out but it worked here. I did like that the only indication that the baby was a demon was the smile. It keeps you wondering a bit if this guy was insane or truly gazing into evil, though the latter appears to be the interpretation the author went with. Part of me would've liked to find out if the baby was evil or even to see some of its evil actions but actually I like what was done here. Kept me wanting more but the story wasn't lacking. Great stuff, especially for a first-timer.

  4. Great story, it was well worth the slow trickle of new pastas posted.

  5. This was great! I see a promising story-telling future.

  6. I don't really get the period setting. Like, I assume it's meant to be one from the language but stuff like Marijuana, owning a car and paying 20 bucks of a writer's salary to buy something sounds modern? Or is that just me?

  7. Thanks for the comments! I just started reading Lovecraft and Poe for the first time, and got inspired to write. I wrote a few stories and found this to be the only one good enough for public viewing, but I wasn't really sure where to place it. Good thing that Inunah was kind enough to help me post it on her site!


    I meant for it to be set somewhere in the 20th century. The first restrictions of marijuana came around in the 1900s, and of course cars were existent at the time. I'll try to add more things that are exclusive to a certain time period in the future though, so thanks for the advice!

    I was originally thinking of making the character either go insane or genuinely be in the middle of supernatural happenings, but I wasn't sure which one to go with. Now that you say it, though, leaving the story open might have improved it! Thanks for the input!

  8. "I meant for it to be set somewhere in the 20th century"
    Can see some lovecraft writing style there
    This sentence seems out of place:
    "not even bothering to lock it"

    On an unrelated note, your story reminds me of this:

    Very good job for a first timer
    Hope you can write more and post them here

  9. Wonderful work.

    It felt like I was reading a somewhat shorter version of Lovecraft, or a less wordy version of Poe.

  10. Very well done, buddy! ^_^ Keep going, I really loved it, and it gave me chills. This history reminds me from "The Omen 666".


  12. Lecram said:
    >This history kind of reminds me of "The Omen 666"

    The hell is a history?

    It's a pasta.

  13. Gah, ya bastards.

    I was ready to throw a few buckets of praise at the author in a comment, but one of you HAD to mention Uzumaki.

    Back to the panic room...

  14. ^ LOL
    Hey Anon, you got what I wanted to mean xD

  15. Loved it.
    It was the first one made? God.... That's awesome!
    Kind of reminds me of The Tell-Tale Heart.

  16. This story definitely has a distinct feel to it, and I thought it was nicely executed. The somewhat Poe-ish feel conflicted at times with the seemingly more modern setting, although not enough to detract from the story considerably.

    The "dying of shock" bit was somewhat hard to swallow and a rather worn cliche. I feel something more interesting could have been applied to the wife rather than a medical event essentially impossible for a healthy middle aged woman. Why not simply have her beside herself in grief and distrusting fear as her husband is taken away by the police?

    Beyond that, a solid first story and certainly enough to keep me interested in what you may post in the future.

  17. you guys can suck his balls all you want, this wasnt scary it was a half witted attempt at Lovecraftian work, keep trying you might get there though.

  18. Haven't finished it yet, but I have to say two things do far: You sound like you're trying to write a Lovecraft story, and who the hell measures a small glass sphere by radius? Don't you mean diameter??

  19. Alright, finished it and reread it. The writing style and setting both sound rather Lovecraftian, though the period did seem to change a small amount throughout the story. I feel like it was very good overall, however, I must say that I liked the beginning better than the end. I feel like the description of the baby was rather un-Lovecraftian or Poe-ish, and the death of the wife felt just a little bit sudden and rushed, not to mention completely implausible in a healthy woman of indeterminate middle age. Other than the forced, rushed feeling ending that took me out of the story, this was an amazing first attempt.

  20. Reminiscent of some of the old greats of supernatural horror. Lovecraft is appropriate, but I'd be more inclined to cite Hawthorne over Poe.

  21. This made me think of the manga Uzumaki. Very much. @_@

  22. Great story. It had a Lovecraftian feel to it with all the refferences to omens and such. It was extremely well written and I throroughly enjoyed it. It is surprising that it is the authors first story. I am very much looking forward to reading any others that he/she writes.

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