Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Lightless City

Do you have someone you hate? Someone you would do anything to hurt, pay any price for vengeance? If so, you may want to consider visiting Lightless City.

To get there, go to any decent sized city and find a deserted alleyway at night. Go into it, and close your eyes as tightly as you can. Whisper “Lightless City”, and concentrate on the darkness. You’ve probably noticed that there are faint colors and abstract shapes you can make out if you try to focus your eyes when they’re closed, watch those images go by. After a few minutes, the images should start to get clearer and brighter.

When this happens, they’ll start taking on detailed forms, images of violent murders, deformed animals, and similar things. No matter what you see, keep your eyes closed. You’ll start to lose track of time, but eventually the images will stop, and you’ll see pure darkness, nothing but deep black, no colors or shapes. When you’re certain that you see pure darkness, open your eyes.

You will now be in a very dark city, there won’t be a single light or star in the sky. You should be able to see a faint dark blue outline of the tall buildings surrounding you. Make your way out of the alley, and walk as quietly as you can down the sidewalk, in any direction. If you here any movement, RUN, as quickly as you can, away from the noise. There are animals in Lightless City, it’s too dark to make out the details, but they’re the size of large, wild felines and will kill any human they catch. Keep moving until you reach an area with smaller buildings, the edge of the city.

A child will approach you, his face dully glowing, letting you see that he is eyeless. He will ask “Will you share your light with me?” Say yes, the child will reach for your face and rip out your right eye. It will be painful, but there shouldn’t be any bleeding or open wound. The child will thank you and leave. Keep walking, and a tall man will appear before you.

“Whose light do you wish to have taken away?”

Speak the name of the person you hate, and as soon as you say their name, they will completely and irreversibly blind.

“Is your hatred satisfied?” the man will ask. If it is, say yes, and you will awaken in the alley. If not, say no, and the man will disappear. Keep walking. You will come across another eyeless child,.

“Will you share your light with me?”

Say yes, and your left eye will be torn out, leaving you blind. Keep walking, and the tall man will appear again, although you of course will have to rely on his voice.

“Whose life do you wish for the darkness to claim?”

Say the name of the one you hate, and they will die. You will not be asked if your hatred is satisfied this time, and you will not be able to return to the alley. I told you to make sure you really hated someone before doing this, you will spend the rest of your life wandering around Lightless City, blind, with only your hatred to keep you warm. For some people, that’s enough.

(This story is credited to a person called KI Simpson)

29 comments:

  1. This one was definitely good.

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  2. Very, very good. wonder if someone wants to test this.

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  3. Good Luck. Hope that you won't stay there forever.

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  4. What happens if you say no to the first child? What does the child do with all the eyeballs? Obviously he's not using them.

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  5. I believe it's not the same child each time...if you actually think about it, many people in the past might have lost both eyes in sacrifice for their hatred.

    Maybe they are reborn after some time has passed, in turn becoming the children who wish to regain some of the light they sacrificed long ago?

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  6. Retarded ritual #32098439059

    Stop making this shit.

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  7. Fu*k the anonymous above me, I'm glad to finally read some good creepy pasta after a long while.

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  8. I want to try this so fucking bad.

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  9. Ugh. Tried this and it didn't work. But then again I think I might have said "Black City" instead of "Lightless City", which just made my DS turn on. Damn it.

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  10. I really like the fact that you cannot tell if the one you spoke of is actually dead if you cant leave.

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  11. Pasta's a little overdone, with some REALLY spicy sauce, and I think I ate a meatball, too.
    9/10

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  12. Wow,I wish I had the courage to try that.

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  13. i tested it. i like it there, and a baby feline-ish thing is acting like my cat. i go there every sunday

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  14. what happens if you didnt have any eyes to begin with lol :) but i really liked it

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  15. If they have no eyes, how could they read the creepypasta? :/

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  16. ^ With a screen reader, of course! Blind people use computers too, you know.

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  17. why u no revenge normal?
    u no have bat?!?11!!

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  18. I'd try it, but I don't have anyone I truly hate. Well, there was this one asshole who used to beat me up back in grade school, but I got over it...mostly...Anyhow, I'm in a great community now, and even if there was a jerk in my new hometown, I've adopted this sort of "love and tolerate" policy, so unless that guy from grade school comes back, then I won't be trying to access the Lightless City anytime soon. Unless I can leave without loosing an eye. that would be nice.

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    1. Future rape child of Mandopony and Michelle CreberAugust 2, 2012 at 12:19 AM

      No community is truly great without George Zimmerman, he really knows how to keep out the trash...

      Wait a second...

      >I've adopted this sort of "love and tolerate" policy

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      It's a BRONY!!!!!! "Love and tolerate" is their motto! Well....I think I now have a reason to go to Lightless City....but I don't plan to stay there. You won't die, but have fun with your vision while you still can, brony ;)

      ...wait, I don't know your name though...blast! It's alright, maybe the man will let me blind ALL the bronies!

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  19. How would they know of it? I mean, did they hear someone else do it there? Because they wouldn't be able to get back.

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  20. Fairly well written, but just another "why the fuck would anyone do this?" ritual.

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  21. Me and my Mate were talking about this and thought, But if you lost both your eyes and became one of those childs that ask to share "light" if someone gives you their eye can you return back to the normal world? since your not blinded anymore

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